31 thoughts on “Mystic Tongues

  1. “I have seen the sun shatter
    into a million pieces upon your chest”

    ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

    Such a STRONG opening. Oh, my! That is amazing. I love how you delved into the theme of happy endings in life. Beautifully penned and visceral.

  2. I am literally swooning right now 😀 I really love how you begin with the opening image of the sun and the idea that it shatters “into a million pieces upon your chest/it told our story – in poetry.”.. it is glorious, poignant, passionate and has a lasting impact on the reader 💝 I always savor your poems and save them for the last. You never disappoint 🙂

  3. I felt a flood of romance in the opening lines, Tricia, and I love the lines:
    ‘we etched our names
    in all that light
    then flipped to last page,
    our happy ending’.

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