The Path

why am I blinded by your sight
immaculate sun
tease the clouds away
I’ve only five senses and cannot
grasp the fleeing whispers
from this splintered earth
hear my request ~
unveil the path
to endless sky.

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Originally tweeted by Tricia (@triciasankey) on March 4, 2021.

Shared with Open Link Night #285: On This Day…
at dVerse ~ Poets Pub, hosted by Linda.

28 thoughts on “The Path

  1. ‘I’ve only five senses and cannot
    grasp the fleeing whispers
    from this splintered earth’

    This is so beautiful and profound! Blake talked about being closed off from reality by our senses and I picked up on that here too.

  2. The juxtaposition between the bright sun and the splintered world is really important to remember. We do need the darkness sometimes to remember. Have you ever seen the movie “Burnt by the sun” ? you cannot get too close to brightness.

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