Pamper your dog

Sometimes I beg
like a dog
with my tooth
                   stuck out

I may bark orders
and I might not shave
my legs

but scratch me just
right
and I'm a fun
       girl for days
       
and then I'm tired
and need a nap

just leave me
     in the hot
          sun
             belly up -

but be there to 
open the door
and shut it
and open again-

and when I bark your name
with love
in my eyes
know I'm yours
and please
give me 
      just
            one more
                           treat.

Kim from Writing in North Norfolk is today’s host of dVerse Poetics. Kim says:
The challenge is to write a poem in the first person that compares some trait of ours with something animal. 

29 thoughts on “Pamper your dog

  1. Romeo is a great name for your little dog, Tricia, his is gorgeous, and I enjoyed your fun comparison! We all need pampering occasionally, some more than others.

  2. Tricia, this is a splendid poem! The picture of your ShihTzu, and your wonderful and touching descriptions of how the sweet thing comports itself in its daily life, had me smiling through tears. I can tell you both love, and are intimately aware of your pet. How fortunate you are. I just lost my ShihTzu Edgrrr last month. My heart is torn Beautiful and tender poem.

    • So sorry to hear about your loss, Rob! Happy this brought a smile through tears! Romeo is a Maltipoo but does look like Shihtzu. We’ve only had him for a year and having a good time with him! ❤

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