you sap
— Tricia (@triciasankey) May 2, 2021
my energy
with fake sugar
and cream
I sip the sky black
extracting
bold truth
and it's a caffeinated
#warcry
scratching the moon
the light stays
under our nails#vss365@Experimentsinfc #ApoemAday pic.twitter.com/3rmJXuNi2m
I LOVE this. The contrast of the dark coffee and the light from the moon under the nails. It’s just fabulous!!!
Thanks for your comment! I wrote this so late last night, wasn’t even sure what was coming out! 😆
Sometimes those ones are amazing. I think being on the edge of not making sense even to yourself can add some real magic to poetry. I say that in seriousness. I don’t know exactly what your poem means but I love it. I love the imagery. I love the feeling it creates.
I agree, I think that’s what I like about mystical writings, it can make sense emotionally, but maybe not literally. I was going for duality with this and thinking about how the light and dark fight for the moon with all the monthly moon cycles. Life is always changing! ❣️
Very bold and edgy, Tricia. Love this! ❤️
~ 🕊Dora
Thanks, Dora! 🥰
Lovely imagery.
Thanks! 🙏
I think this is one of my favorites of yours, Tricia!
❤
David
Thanks, David! I had fun with this one! ❤