Just Breathe

Shared with dVerse for Quadrille Monday where De Jackson hosts and asks us to write a poem in 44 words that includes the word “heart”

Published by Tricia Sankey

Plays with words in her free time.

44 thoughts on “Just Breathe

  1. Intricate wordplay. Don’t be too sure you have no power. When intention (e.g. the message in a bottle) is thrown into the universe things can happen…

    1. Thanks, Lisa! I do believe we all have more power than we know. I just joined a meditation group for 21 days and I think the concentration on the breathing partially inspired this! πŸ˜…

  2. I’d consider mySelf lucky if I found a message in a bottle, even if all it did was to remind me to breathe.
    Breath is more than half the battle…

  3. Ooh this is sooo soothing πŸ’πŸ’ just like waves that lap on the shore πŸ™‚ Gorgeous work, Tricia!!

  4. Charming. I like the wistfulness, the fatigue that permeates throughout that seems nicely entwined with the ideas of a deep sea and the reminder to oneself to breathe. Excellent, excellent.

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