Pour me in your glass
and swirl me around
taste my fizzy flavor
keep me firmly in your hands
I’ll give you all I have
until you fall
and then you’ll feel
the madness of the moon
on ocean waves
Today at dVerse, Ingrid hosts and asks us to write a poem using only concrete nouns, subject matter and imagery. Poets are to avoid writing directly of the emotions that concrete objects invoke. It should be left to readers to experience the emotions, without the poet referring to them directly.
I reworked an older poem and hope this fits the prompt!
Tricia Sankey 
The madness of the moon in ocean waves… what a great description.
Appreciate your comment, Bjorn! ❣ 🌕 ❣
Gorgeously sensual write, Tricia 💝 I can picture the madness of the moon in ocean waves 😍
This was a fun rewrite, thanks, Sanaa! 🌜💓🌛
Your concrete writing has the buzz …. of moonlit madness! Fun read, Tricia.
pax,
dora
Thanks, Dora! I tried to keep my abstract ideas somewhat tangible in the end! 😅
The challenge in your poetry to the lover is definitely tangible! 😀
Thank you!! 🍷
YW 🙂
Concreterrific!
Thanks, Ron.!! 🥰
I love the quick pacing of the words, until finally it is: the madness of the moon. Cheers!
Appreciate your comment, cheers, Grace! 🍷
I think I had one of those fuzzy drinks once …. never drank fuzzy again!
Packs a punch 👊 Thanks, Bev! 💞
Sumptuous write. Puts me in the mood for my glass of wine. 😉
Thanks for reading, cheers! 🍷
You’re most welcome. Cheers!
Nice one.
Happy Tuesday
Much💛love
Thanks, Gillena! 💞
Madness of the moon! That must be quite a drink!
Cheers, Dwight!🍷
:>)
And intoxicating poem, Tricia!
Thanks, Ingrid! 🙏
great write. don’t think i fancy a glass of fuzzy though will stick with my hot chocolate
Thanks, Roger! Hot chocolate is never a bad idea either! ☕
Oh, so romantic! I think I fell a little in love!
Thanks, Xan, glad you enjoyed! 💞
Beautiful and sensuous…
Thanks, Helen! 🍷
this is spot on, Tricia!
❤
David
Thanks, David! 🍷
That’s a good madness! (K)
I think it can be! I see it as a loss of control, but if a pure love, it’s a good madness! 💓
Ah! Who can say no to moon madness!
Fantastic, Tricia. 💞
Thanks so much, Punam! 💞
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