The night wore heels,
a happy dance of leaves
reveling on warm winds,
we ignored the morse code
of constellations far away,
predicting mourning in the morn,
their silly plots to trap the sun,
never arise,
you’ll see…
the dawn forever breaks free.
written for #vss365 and sharing with dVerse Poets Pub for OLN
Originally tweeted by Tricia (@triciasankey) on December 9, 2021.
I love this, Tricia! Such a lovely atmosphere and also this wonderful metaphor going on. Just spot on.
Thrilled you enjoyed it! ๐ฅฐ
Awesome, TS. Sorry I couldn’t be there to hear it!
Thanks, Ron. I missed the Live as well, unfortunately! ๐
Beautiful images Tricia. I love the stars Morris code!
Thanks, Dwight! ๐ซ
Aww to this. And what a great title. loved. Thanks.
Thanks, Selma! ๐ซ๐ซ๐ซ
I love the free flow of this, Tricia!
Thanks, Ingrid! ๐ซ๐ซ๐ซ
That title deserves an award in itself! ๐
Pax,
Dora
Thanks, Dora, glad you liked it! ๐ ๐ ๐
Tricia I love the bright and shining spirit that flows through this from beginning to end. Don’t let those …. get you down indeed! “dawn forever breaks free”
Thanks, Lisa! Short but sweet contribution this week! ๐
You’re most welcome.
However long the night, the sun returns. (K)
True, still amazing every morning, too! Thanks Kerfe! ๐
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous write ๐ Wow! ๐๐
Thanks, Sanaa! ๐ฅฐ
Tricia, I love the hope in this. A great reminder to not get trapped in others’ messages. A great ending.
Thanks, Ali! I wanted to relay the hope and faith in good things on the horizon! ๐
Love it… I do remember when I wrote vss on twitter…the story in here is great, as is the phrasing from beginning to end.
Thanks, it’s fun writing vss, glad you enjoyed this! ๐ซ๐ซ๐ซ
Reblogged this on Nelsapy.
A catchy title that has an awesome follow through! Poetry with flow, energy and imagery!
Thanks so much, I appreciate your feedback! ๐ฅฐ
not a problem…
Stunning.
Thank you!! ๐