He was the #right kind of wrong
and I lost the plot,
goodbye yellow brick road,
find the detour in a dastardly mash
of sugar plum carnage.
Coffee coffee buzzbuzzbuzz
keep it coming –
add the urban bourbon
of soft brown eyes
and change is brewing
Originally tweeted by Tricia (@triciasankey) on July 27, 2022.
Written for #dVerse #Poetics where I used the prompt ice-cream flavors: Goodbye Yellow Brick Road, Dastardly Mash, Sugar Plum, Coffee Coffee Buzzbuzzbuzz, Urban Bourbon and Change is Brewing!! 🍨
40 thoughts on “Right kind of Wrong”
I love this poem Tricia.
Thanks, Gabriela!! This was a fun one! 🍧
My pleasure 🌺🌸
LOVED the ending of this one! Made me smile. Good use of many flavors!
Thanks so much, Lilian!! This was a great prompt to get me out of my comfort zone, a little coffee this morning and it just wrote itself! 😆☕🍨😋
I loved the last two liines! Wonderful poem.
Thanks so much, Dale! 🥰
I enjoyed this poem. You’ve captured the feeling of falling for the right kind of wrong person so well
Thanks, Nitin, so glad it worked for you! 🥰
I love it, Tricia – a double-shot espresso of words!
Thanks, Ingrid! I was on quite the coffee buzz when I wrote this! 😆💗☕💗
I think I am now 😅
It gets the synapses snapping! 🎇
And sets the alliteration alight 🤣
A masterful mashup of the flavors, Tricia.
Appreciate your eclectic tastes, Helen! 😆💗
A beautiful poem! Loved it.
Thanks for your kind comment, Kaushal! 💖
Ooh just the idea of urban bourbon soft brown eyes. Yummy! I can believe the sugar plum carnage aftermath. Such an entertaining poem, Tricia.
Fun prompt! Appreciate your comment, Lisa!! 💖
Lovely! I think you captured Damon quite well here 😀 I love; “add the urban bourbon of soft brown eyes.” 😍😍
Thanks, Sanaa, I know Damon has blue eyes, but this was a little poetic license! 😆
I can attest to the fact that bourbon eyes can make anyone weak in the knees! Such a delightful write, Tricia. 💖
Thanks, so glad you enjoyed, Punam! 💓
You are welcome. 💖
I like the ending
Yay! thanks for your feedback! 💖
I enjoyed this one even more on the second read. Lovely write, Tricia! 🥰
That’s good to hear! Thanks, Jeff! 💖🥰
You’re welcome, Tricia! Always. 🥰
The right kind of wrong – love the character description. Love the mish mash specially: urban bourbon.
Thanks so much, Grace! 🍨
Yum! You just named some of my favorite flavors. 😋
Glad you enjoyed! 🍨