There was a
spinning sun
inside your eyes
and in soft surrender
I dived –
you traced bright orbs
across my skin
in rolling, cloudless,
sheets of sky
in panoramic bliss
we soared up high
then collapsed
in waves
u n d o n e
#WriteMap 084
Originally tweeted by Tricia (@triciasankey) on September 1, 2022.
Shared with dVerse Poets Pub where Linda hosts Open Link Night. Come join us!
Tricia Sankey 
Nicely done. Luv the whimsical romantic mood
Much💛love
Thanks, going for uplifting this week! 🌞
This is spectacular and so romantic.
Glad you think so, Linda! Appreciate you hosting this week! 🥰
It’s my pleasure. 😊
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This is gorgeous, Tricia! 💗
Thanks, Michele, I had fun with it! 🌞
I love the deep sensuous feel of your poem … cheers.
Thanks, Helen!! ♥️☀️♥️
You describe that sort of an intimate, connection, so very, beautifully.
Appreciate your kind words! ♥️🌞♥️
Happy endings are always nice 🙂
Thanks, Lisa! Everything comes together and combusts just to come undone again, doesn’t it?
Stunning! Love all the shapes and sounds and sensuality of this 🙂
Thanks so much, Sunra!! ❤️🌞❤️
Such wonderful sensations, Tricia! 🥰
Glad you enjoyed it!! 💕☀️💕
Blessed be the truth that surrender opens both humble and divine doors.
Yes! I think we’re all being guided to the doors! 💕🍷
So gorgeous and so well written 👌👌
Thanks!! ♥️☀️♥️
This is a lovely journey!
Thanks so much, Kerfe! 💕☀️💕
this is gorgeous Tricia! 💖
Glad you enjoyed, Cindy! 🌻🌞🌻
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Your poem brings forth the feeling of being lost inside the moment of each other. Nicely done.
Thanks for your comment, Ali! Happy you enjoyed!! 💓
I love the way you describe the passion with language that made me think of diving in warm water.
Thanks! Yes, a dive and that surrender into water and sky! Interpretations are fun! 💓
This is beautiful!!! Magically written, my friend. Love love love it 🤍🙌🏻🤗
Thanks Grace, happy to hear! 🥰
Of course! Missed reading your work 🤗
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