Soft Surrender

There was a
spinning sun
inside your eyes

and in soft surrender
I dived –

you traced bright orbs
across my skin

in rolling, cloudless,
sheets of sky

in panoramic bliss
we soared up high

then collapsed
in waves
u n d o n e

#WriteMap 084

smoke sunset GIF by Living Stills

Originally tweeted by Tricia (@triciasankey) on September 1, 2022.

Shared with dVerse Poets Pub where Linda hosts Open Link Night. Come join us!

Published by Tricia Sankey

Plays with words in her free time.

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