Bjorn is hosting Meeting the Bar at dVerse and challenges us to write a Bref Double. I had fun adding to a tweet from this morning to fit the form.
I read your mind
all your secret thoughts
pocketing prose, reaching past
diaphanous curtains, pushing
a sacred find
beneath the stars
you fading fast
in flirtatious slumber, drifting
Oh, how I’ve pined
to see your skull
seven times the spell was cast
while I waited, longing…
our love doth bind
through many moons, may it last!
30 thoughts on “Pocketing Prose #dVerse #MTB”
Spellbinding, your poem as Cupid’s arrow.
Thanks Dora! I love the mythology of Psyche and Cupid from Metamorphoses! 💓
Gorgeous poem Tricia 👏👏👏
Thanks so much, Gabriela! ❤️🌹❤️
My pleasure hon 🌺🌸❤️
So lovely verses!
Glad you enjoyed it, Kaushal! ❤️🌹❤️
Nicely done Tricia! ❣️
Thanks so much, Cindy! ❤️🌹❤️
Quite a spell! 💙
Thanks, the form is a fav of mine, now! ✨
Dreamy and mysterious. (K)
Thanks so much, Kerfe!! 💖
I love the witchy magic of this fun write, Tricia – spellbinding! 🪄
Thanks, the form really inspired me! 💝
Divinely macabre. Love it!
Thanks, pleased you enjoyed it! ♥️🌹♥️
Reads like a charm. Am enchanting poem.
Thanks, Gillena, have a great weekend! ❤️🌹❤️
Beautifully written by a talented writer. Smooth and interesting ❤❤
Thanks, so happy to hear, Lamittan! 💝
You’re most welcome, dear Tricia ❤
This was a really cool write… is it just me, but I see a stalker in the poem?
Thanks, Bjorn! It’s a bit creepy but I don’t judge these characters that pop up in my head! 😆
Superb, Tricia! 👏👏👏🖤
Thanks so much, Jeff! 🖤🌹🖤
You’re most welcome, Tricia! Always. ✨🖤🖤