I allow my spirit to sit
while my soul floats up
feel the way the air crackles
with the spin of the earth
or is it the drum of the ocean floor?
A stranger instructs
and as clarity climbs
Out of body
in the mists
I’ve memories of
soft, greedy colors
I surrender to the
distant echoes and listen
again and again
Written for dVerse Open Link Night where Lillian is hosting. There will be a second Live poetry reading on Saturday at 10am EST. I hope to make it!
If you haven’t checked out all the poetry on my YT channel, click here!
40 thoughts on ““Surrender” with #432hz music for #dVerseOLN”
“Smoky stardust” – gosh that is GENIUS!!! Your star terminology is absolutely beautiful as always! And such a wonderful piece altogether, gorgeous flow and peace 🤍🤍
Thanks, Grace! I did also share with the prompt #inkMine this week on twitter as some of the prompt words were memories, greedy, echo, and stardust. I like how it turned out with the 432hz music from the YouTube library, seemed to fit. So happy you enjoyed it! 🥰
Beautiful introspective and meditative piece, I love the idea of surrendering to the natural world and letting go of control.
Thanks, Jay! Yes, I think surrendering to the peace in nature or within works pretty well for me most days! 🥰
“Out of body
in the mists”
Wow! Beautiful. 🙂
Thanks so much! ♥️🙏♥️
I want to write a story with that title.
Lovely piece of writing coupled with enchanting music. Perfect duo. 💫
Thanks, Nancy! So happy you enjoyed this! 🥰
So beautiful–and soothing, too, Tricia! 💙
Thanks, Merril! It was relaxing writing it! 🥰
You’re welcome, Tricia!
sooooo soothing I agree Merril
I enjoyed this, Tricia – is there something about this frequency which soothes the mind? I felt it instantly 🙂
Thanks, Ingrid! I know it’s short here, but I believe the 432 HZ does promote healing, and relaxation. It was said to be the frequency of the universe. I may try to get a longer video done soon with this whole soundtrack. Glad you enjoyed it!! 💓 PS the soundtrack is Sinta Positivo Pineal com 432 hz.. he added my reel to his audio page on Instagram! Here is a link to the full soundtrack https://www.boomplay.com/songs/98680265
This is gorgeous Tricia! I absolutely loved the vibration and beauty of your poem and the music added such a great dimension! 💞
Thanks, Cindy! I may make some longer videos with the 432 Hz in the future, so happy you enjoyed it! 🥰
You’re welcome Tricia! I wish you were with me this morning.. i had thoughts of Elvis in the background and a pink Cadillac but I was at a lot! ❤️
were you meditating to Elvis? 😆 Oh, I’m listening to your YT reading now, cool! 🤩
hahahahah you make me laugh.. no but i needed Tim or you to help me.., hahaha
out of body….in the mists…..surrendering….this is meditation’s release.
Yes, to let go of my control and allow God to work through me, is the goal! 💯 Thanks so much! ❤️🙏❤️
An excellent dive into the meditational float!
Thanks, Brendan! ♥️🙏♥️🎵🎶
Fantastically beautiful! 💖
Thanks so much, Jeff! ❤️🙏❤️
You’re welcome, Tricia! 💖🙏💖
Ooh! Evocative and sensory, Tricia! ❤ I'll have what you're having! 🙂
Thanks, Sunra!! Drink up! 🥂
Ha ha! Chin chin, Tricia!🥂
Attuned, part of it all. Beautiful Tricia and nice to read it to the meditative frequency sound. 4-3-2-1!
Thanks so much, Lisa! ❤️🙏❤️
You’re welcome ❤
This is absolutely stunning! I especially love; “I’ve memories of smoky stardust.” 😍😍
Thanks, Sanaa, happy you enjoyed it! 🥰🎶✨
This sounds like a wonderful way to find yourself… I am not sure I could do that.
Thanks, it’s a challenge to surrender and release yourself complete, perhaps even have an OBE, but fun to try!! 🥰