Snooping stars
stare
as we drain the dark side
of moon
gulp it down black
and plant daffodils
in deep scars
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Tricia Sankey 
wow truly awesome imagery Tricia! ❣️
Thanks, Cindy! Planting the light is what poetry is about! 💫
You got that right Tricia! ❣️
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Tricia, specially love this part: plant daffodils
in deep scars
Great to hear, appreciate you hosting, tonight! 🥰💫💐
Terse and terrific imagery!
Thanks so much, Mish! 💖
Like abstract art! Love it.
Thanks so much, Dora! 🌼🌒💫
I love the imagery of the dark side of the moon!
Thanks, I think the dark side needs a little more poetry and daffodils while I’m at it! 😆✨
I love the hope in the ending lines. Thanks for sharing this moody micro, Tricia :))
Thanks, I couldn’t leave it so dark! 🌼🙏🌼
That darker side of the moon, surely can, use a little, extra, color…
Yes, my thoughts, exactly! 🌼🙏🌼
Tightly said, I would prefer more root and vibe and moonlight. But I’m not a modern reader.
Yeah, this is a tiny tale, but written for Instagram and Twitter. 🌼🙏🌼
Lovely imagery!
Thank you! 🌼✨
Lovely and unique imagery, Tricia!
Thanks, Merril! 🌼💐🌼
You’re welcome, Tricia! 😊
This is like an animation…I can see the images merging into one another. (K)
I actually placed a video of a daffodil into the video of moon with stars, I like mixing it up on picmonkey and creating these short clips!
Layers are always good I think.
Yes, totally! 😄
This is gorgeous Tricia …. I am tempted to forego the usual tablespoon of heavy cream in my coffee this morning. Daffodils must thrive however, therefore I will drink it black.
Thanks so much, Helen! The extra caffeine in the dark brew will surely kickstart a great day! 🌻💐🌻
TRICIA, those last two lines!!!!! Holy crap, I read them over and over…truly genius writing!!!! In just a few lines you captured so much elegance and meaning. Amazingly done as always, my friend 🤍🤗
So pleased you think so, Grace!! You know I love writing about the moon – each side inspires! 🌓
Tricia, you left my scalp tingling on this one.
Pleased to hear it! 🌼🙏🌼
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I like the idea of ‘gulping down’ the moon: I bet that would solve all kinds of problems 😅 🌝 😊
Thanks, Ingrid, it’s definitely something you want to down quickly, that darkness! 😄
Those scars — love how you make them beautiful
Thanks, the alchemy of love!! 🥰
Gorgeous, gorgeous write Tricia!! 😍😍
Thanks, Sanaa, happy you enjoyed! 🥰