The Drive Home #dVerseProsery

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It’s 2 am and my shift at the hospital is finally over. I’m exhausted.

While sitting at the red light, a car full of teenagers has pulled alongside me, windows down and music blaring.

All of a sudden, I snap. Maybe due to the fact that my patient just died without her family in the room. I lower my window, wave, and turn up my own radio. I sing the lyrics as loud as I can and wink at the shocked boy in the front seat. When the light turns green, I floor it.

If only they could know how very fast it goes. They enjoy their unexamined existence without meaning. I sigh. I prefer keeping in mind even the possibility that existence has its own reason for being. And for now, the music is loud and I’m enjoying my drive.

Today at dVerse, we are writing Prosery. This is where we are given a line from a poem and asked to write a story no longer than 144 words that includes the line. Merril chose:

I prefer keeping in mind even the possibility that existence has its own reason for being.

Wisława Szymborska, ‘Possibilities

31 thoughts on “The Drive Home #dVerseProsery

  1. I absolutely love this! 💝 From ” turn up my own radio,” to “I’m enjoying my drive,” you portray beautifully how important it is to value life and to be compassionate toward others. Yes, there are many who live life without bothering to learn the meaning behind it. I wish they would put in effort.

    xoxo

  2. This is superb. Such a contrast of the party-goer and the tired medical worker. And then the snap – so perfectly illustrated and so imaginable. And it fits the quote very aptly. I love it!

    • Thanks so much! It’s interesting the psychology of getting older. I’m 46 now and just beginning to realize we have to savor every moment, good and bad, because they are all valuable. 💖

  3. Such a dire scene you’ve painted here and it’s very evocative in the sense of snapping, our breaking points. Only so much one can handle before it gets too much, and music can definitely be a relief for all those emotions germane to that. Very well-written! It’s very realistic.

  4. All of a sudden, I snap.

    Tricia – wow – I did not expect the words that followed this line – I was expecting some yelling at the very least… you really tricked me 😀

    Well done!

    Yours,
    David

  5. I can’t imagine what it’s like for medical staff in these difficult times, Tricia, although I get a bit of an idea from my sister-in-law, who is a nurse, but I do remember turning up the stereo in my car after a long day teaching – it helped! And I’ve been caught singing along to heavy metal on many occasions. 😊

  6. This was a fun take on the prompt with a serious message. I love imagining this women letting her hair down and putting her foot down at the same time!

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